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Dear Professor,
I am greatly grateful that you can spare some time to read my letter. I am a Chinese undergraduate from XX, which is one of the top 10 universities in China, and I will graduate in 2009. After that, I want to continue my education by pursuing a master degree in France.
I am now in the department of XX. My primary interest is in international commerce, and I notice that ESSEC is on top of that field, so I decide to exert myself to get in.
Your research in “cross-cultural relationship marketing”, especially your publications on business of China as well as Southeast Asia, are of particular interest to me. And I would like to deal with business between Europe and China in my career. That's why I seek entry to your theme.
During my university years, I am used to working in a team environment. For example, I was administrative vice minister in Student Union, and organized and schemed activities along with competitions in university. For my excellent job, I gained the scholarship for entertainment and physical education activities.
After passing College English Tests 4&6, I turned to learn French last year and I got a score of 463 in TCF. I am preparing for IELTS currently, and if GMAT is necessary for applying master degree in ESSEC, I shall take the test after the IELTS test.
With so much admiration and enthusiasm, I hope I would have the opportunity to work under your supervision. If admitted, I am able to continue working along the lines of your present research. Thanks for your kindness and consideration.
Yours sincerely,
XX
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Department of biology
China South University
Changsha
P.R.China
September 27, 2012
Applying for admittance
Dr.Smith of Biological Engineer
Lelandstanfordjunior University
Dear Mr.Smith,
I’m writing to apply for admission to pursue a master’s degree in biological engineering.
My name isLi Hua, a twenty-year-old male senior majoring in Biological Engineer from Xiangya Medical School of China South University. I fell in love with my major in the last 4-year study.I am very eager to apply for an opportunity to the next fall of my study. I’ve gotten a grade point average of 3.8 and won first-class scholarship twice and second-class scholarship once. I published an essay about gene expression on Chinese Journal of Biotechnology (12.7.2011).
I think Lelandstanfordjunior University is one of the most excellent university and the Biology Major is really superb. I take angreat interest in gene studying and I found your recent research is related with this field.
My parents will help me with 70% study fee and I will earn the rest by working or attempt for scholarship.
Please send catalog and application forms to me. I shall be greatly appreciated. Very truly yours,
Li Hua