不夠尊重老人的原因雅思作文
There is not enough respect for the elderly people. What are the causes and what problems does this phenomenon create?
There is a growing tendency nowadays for some people to regard the elderly people as a troublesome group. Gradually, this leads to not revere （這是啥意思？！ lead to 后面接 doing ！） the elderly people in diverse conditions. Yet in my opinion, instead of contempting every one should treat them as our treasure （這句話本身就有點變扭，感覺很怪！） . But, what causes the promble? Here i give two major reasons （這句太廢話了，把兩個理由總結一下，寫出來會比較好） .
On the one hand, some elder people （第一段用的是 elderly people ，這里怎么又變了？！） live without any income. In addition, they are weak even some of them cannot look after themselves （這分明是兩個句子，怎么可以寫在一起！） .Thus, they have to be given a hand. A recent statistics （ statistics 這里好像應該是復數吧） shows that 90 percent of the elderly people need to provide （應該是被動語態吧） the allowance and nurses. It costs 80 billions （ billion 不可數的！） yuan every year. So the elderly people become a burden to the society. On the other hand ,the young are to blame. Their consciousness of respecting the elderly people should be promoted. What is worse, they dont regard anyone.
Nevertheness （應該是 nevertheless ） , for the above reasons, we also can take immediate and specific measures to cope with them. Because no one can deny the fact that a persons moral is the most important aspect of the society. If we lose it,I （人稱不要變來變去） cant image, （這里逗號多余） what may happen to our society. How terrible it is! As is known to everyone, we are all getting old. But, we may not being esteemed. A yeasty world is proceeding.
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