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劍橋PET寫作解析

　　導語：備考PET，正常的步驟是先學習劍橋教程，然后再進入沖刺階段。下面YJBYS小編分享劍橋PET寫作解析，歡迎參考!

　　Writing

　　Sample answer of Question 7:

　　I was standing beside someone famous! I was so excited that during a few seconds I couldn't do anything. I was standing and looking at him. He was more taller and more beautiful than he seemed on TV. Suddenly he turned his head and fixed me. I was petrified! He smiled and said hello. I opened my mouth but I couldn't say something. He asked me how I like the show. Finally I answered him. I said it was great. I added that I loved his music and particular his last album. I asked him to sign me an autograph the he shook my hand and went.

　　考官點評

　　這封信寫得很成功，語言揮灑自如，詞匯豐富，例如：Suddenly he turned his head …. I was petrified.盡管存在一些小錯誤。

　　分數(shù)：5

　　同學們，這道題是必須拿滿分的，因為這是PET寫作中最容易得分的題型，要注意只幾點：

　　1. 書信格式不可少;

　　2. 開頭結尾客套話;

　　3. 緊扣3要點，一點一句話;

　　4. 時態(tài)要正確;

　　5. 拼寫要準確;

　　6. 卷面要整潔。

　　咱們同學平時容易出現(xiàn)這些錯誤：1. 稱呼后面的逗號忘記了;2. 忘記答全了，少答一點;3. 時態(tài)有錯誤;4.常用單詞的拼寫出錯。這些要引以為戒!考前再趕緊寫幾篇，請老師批改，爭取滿分啊!!!!

　　Question 8

　　Hi! How are you? Are you all right? I'm fine. Is it very hot in Australia now? Now my country is coming the winter. It is cold everyday. I went to Fragrant Hill last week. It was very cold. But I enjoyed to climb up the mountain After 2 months, I will go to snow mountains because I can play "Snow board". When I was 17 years old I begun to play it. I can play it very well. I have never been in Australia but I saw on TV about Australia. I think Australia is hot whole year! Is this true? Please tell me and I have never played surfing please teach me. I'd like to play surfing! If you could come to China, I can show you all around China. Now China is developing. I want to take you to the mountains because it is very beautiful the mountains. The leaf is changing from green to red or yellow! Can you imagine like New England area? The same! Anyway I enjoy to go all of Japan. Have a good time. I hope you will be happy! Take care! Bye!

　　考官點評

　　這封信內容詳細，語氣友好。作者語言能力較強，用詞貼切。盡管有些錯誤，但不妨礙理解。

　　分數(shù)：4

　　解題要點：

　　1. 不忘涂卡7還是8;

　　2. 句式多變詞匯豐富;

　　3. 時態(tài)正確信息連貫;

　　4. 問題全答加連詞;

　　5. 寫完檢查卷面整潔。

　　不少同學5月12日就要參加PET考試，張老師再留幾篇作文給同學們進行考前熱身，提供的樣文是張載陽同學編寫，張老師批改過的，供同學們參考。張載陽KET就在張老師班上，KET成績優(yōu)秀。他是個愛學習、會學習的優(yōu)秀學生，課上認真聽講，課后除了完成課堂上布置的作業(yè)，另外還練習《學習、練練、考考》，并請我批改練習的作文。孩子的家長非常熱心，對孩子的學習非常關心。家長說孩子遇到張老師是幸運的，張老師覺得遇到這么出色的孩子、這么有責任心的家長，張老師也是幸運的：讓我們?yōu)榱送粋€目標一起加油!希望張載陽PET仍然能夠考優(yōu)秀!加油!!

　　1. Tim，an English friend of yours, has asked you to go to a concert with him this Saturday, but you cannot go. Write an email to Tim. In your email, you should

　　☆Apologize

　　☆Explain why you cannot go

　　☆Suggest something you can do together the following weekend

　　Dear Tim，

　　I 'm very sorry that I can't go to the concert with you this Saturday. I have to go shopping with my family the whole day. But next Saturday I've got enough time. What about going to see a movie?

　　Yours,

　　David

　　2. Some friends in the USA have just had their first baby and you decide to write to them immediately. Write an email to your friends. In your email, you should

　　☆offer them your congratulations

　　☆ask about their baby

　　☆say what present you are sending them.

　　Dear friends,

　　Congratulations! You've got your first baby. What′s the name of it? It′s boy or girl? I'll send you some toys and clothes as present for them. The best wishes from,

　　David

　　3. You visit an art gallery and buy this postcard.

　　You decided to send the postcard to your friend Chris, who lives in Australia.

　　In your postcard, you should

　　☆say something about the art gallery

　　☆explain you have chosen to send Chris this postcard

　　☆ask Chris about the weather in Australia.

　　Dear Chris,

　　I visited an art gallery and bought this postcard. The gallery was very nice and the picture and sculpture was amazing! I know you like things which are strange, so I have chosen this one. By the way, what′s the weather in Australia? Is it comfortable?Write soon.

　　Yours

　　David

　　4. This is part of a letter you receive from some English friends.

　　For our next holiday, we want to visit your country.

　　Is it best to spend our time in a city or in the countryside?

　　Which would you recommend and why?

　　Dear friend,

　　I 'm very happy that you can come. I think country is good for you. There are mountains near the city. You can have good scenery there, and it's very high. So you can train your body well. There're some games too. We must work with other people, so you can make many new friends! By the way, there're a lot of farms for the public to visit. And you can go there to do some farm work, such as feeding animals, getting milk from a cow, picking the fruits, working in the field....... If you work hard, maybe the owner of the farm will give you some money! Do you think it's good?Hope to see you soon!

　　Yours,

　　David

　　5. Your English teacher has asked you to write a story.

　　Your story must begin with this sentence:

　　The bus was late so I decided to walk.

　　The bus was late so I decided to walk. I must arrive at my grandmother's house 5 miles away at 10'clock. Today was her birthday. And it was 9.30 now. So I ran on the pavement. I thought of taxi but I couldn't find any taxi on the road. There wasn't any subway nearby at all! So I had to run very fast. At that moment, I saw my friend Tom. He was walking towards his car! How lucky I was!I told him what I was trying to do and asked whether he could give me a lift. And he agreed. He drove so fast that I arrived there at 9.45 before the birthday party began!

　　Weather:天氣

　　Whether:是否

　　6. This is part of a letter you receive from a friend in the U.S.A.

　　-I guess there are many traditional festivals in your country. What′s the most meaningful one? What do people celebrate this festival? Write and tell me all about it!

　　.Now write a letter, answering your friend's questions.

　　.Write your letter in about 100 words on your answer sheet.

　　Dear friend,

　　I'm very happy to receive your letter. You're right, there are many traditional festivals in my country. And in my opinion, the Spring Festival is the most meaningful one, because it is the first day of the lunar New Year. And in the morning of that day people will buy fireworks, and stick paper cut on the window. They'll clean the room, and make dumplings. People who work far away usually try to get home to have a family reunion. In the evening, family members gather together to have a big meal and eat dumplings while watching Spring Festival Gala. And they'll also set off fireworks and firecrackers. Do you think it's amazing? What's the most meaningful traditional festival in your country?

　　Yours,

　　David

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